Narrative: Waiter
Given this picture, BC wrote:
Perfumed and white wall paper surround the dark gloomy rooms that lie silently on the royal red carpets. The only light to the rooms is the bright sun shining through the crystal clean windows.
Stomp Stomp Stomp… that’s the butler who feels he is underpaid. Wearing black socks – they’re as dark as the dark midnight sky.
Tap, Tap, Tap…that’s the cold sharp silver tray with the pearl white cups shivering next to the enormous silver jug.
There it is…the Master’s solid gold room…
and EB wrote:
Dark gloomy rooms surrounded me. Patterns of red and blue wallpaper were everywhere. The royal red carpet that I was on was as soft as a kiwi’s fur. The richness oozed through the carpet, doors and windows.
Me, with a smug happy smile carrying the really hot tea…as hot as lava. My turban shining in the sunlight with my jet black hair underneath.
He was lonely in the kitchen making the tea…


October 11th, 2008 at 3:02 am
Dear EB and BC
Both of these introductions leave me dying to know just what was going to happen in the rest of your stories. .. Well done on some very descriptive, captivating writing!
Mrs H.
December 3rd, 2008 at 4:19 pm
hi
what a lovely story bc i love you descriptive writing